| = Laura, that end line is not yours! | Corina Gina Papouis [04.Oct.08 23:58] |
| It's form 'Hello' by Evanescence.. I love that song! so unless you point out in your text where the line is coming from...it's kind of not yours! Regards! | |
| = well | Muresan Laura [05.Oct.08 00:05] |
| that's why I put it between " ". because it is not mine | |
| = fair enough but... | Corina Gina Papouis [05.Oct.08 00:23] |
| I am still not clear if that is sufficient, I mean without mentioning an author's name. Don't mean to pick on you!:)that line just struck me as..odd without its master.. Regards! | |
| = different ending | Muresan Laura [05.Oct.08 13:51] |
| :) | |
| = Laura!:) | Corina Gina Papouis [05.Oct.08 16:49] |
| I loved the previous ending though! If I were you I would have changed the subtitle to (October)..with Evanescence or something like that… Good poem eitherway! Cheers, Corina | |