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= a verse from me..
Corina Gina Papouis
[10.Oct.08 14:43]
...'and mud on your foreheads' (I dare add a line to the end of your poem as I thought it mirrors the first verse!):)
Good poem!
Cheers
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dan marius
[10.Oct.08 17:29]
now that's macabre :)) kidding. glad you liked it
= No wonder
Simona Sumanaru
[11.Oct.08 01:31]
we (as a nation) vote like this, Dan. We've got no brains. Skulls got cracked open. Like nuts. We might be nuts. Applauding the Big Squirrels. As the big nuts we are. And hey, you're right again. Election day falls in fall. I know you knew.

Your poems always come in tiny morsels that burst into flavor in my brain. Hmmm, what a feast!

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= a verse from me..	Corina Gina Papouis [10.Oct.08 14:43]
...'and mud on your foreheads' (I dare add a line to the end of your poem as I thought it mirrors the first verse!):) Good poem! Cheers

= .	dan marius [10.Oct.08 17:29]
now that's macabre :)) kidding. glad you liked it

= No wonder	Simona Sumanaru [11.Oct.08 01:31]
we (as a nation) vote like this, Dan. We've got no brains. Skulls got cracked open. Like nuts. We might be nuts. Applauding the Big Squirrels. As the big nuts we are. And hey, you're right again. Election day falls in fall. I know you knew. Your poems always come in tiny morsels that burst into flavor in my brain. Hmmm, what a feast!