| = forgive me Marius | Corina Gina Papouis [08.Nov.08 13:45] |
| but I think this is one of your best pomes! You can touch its sensitive core and yet taste the determination of finding the truth. Beautiful! Corina | |
| = errrr | Corina Gina Papouis [08.Nov.08 13:45] |
| poems! | |
| + A plea for forgiveness... | John Willy Kopperud [08.Nov.08 14:14] |
| ...and the need for peace in the material and the spiritual world. Touching and very well delivered! I fully agree with Corina, seeing that she considers this poem one of your best! Cheers rom Willy | |
| = Thank you Corina! | Marius Surleac [08.Nov.08 16:06] |
| Corina, thank you very much for your beautiful words. That Truth - I understand it in two ways: religious and scientific view. Here is more about the religious one, because it goes deeply, right in the soul. Thank you very much! Best wishes, Marius | |
| = Thank you very much Willy! | Marius Surleac [08.Nov.08 16:11] |
| Yes Willy, this is a plea for forgiveness in front of God. Sometimes we need to feel our souls in a good mood, to be relaxed and to enjoy life more than ever. I am glad you liked it and I thank you very much for the twinkle one. I appreciate it. P.S. Hope you both liked the song that is to be found when clicking on the fourth verse. Best wishes my friend, Marius | |
| = completion... | Marius Surleac [08.Nov.08 16:15] |
| The poem goes better with the song. It creates a special feeling. Thank you very much my friends! | |
| = 7 | felix nicolau [18.Nov.08 19:44] |
| apart from the final lines, i liked the abstractedness of this poem | |
| = Thank you Felix! | Marius Surleac [18.Nov.08 19:56] |
| Sharp eye, Felix! Glad you liked it! Thank you very much! Cheers, Marius | |