| = welcome new member! | Marius Surleac [15.Nov.08 00:19] |
| Interesting. I think that the shape of the text brings more like poetry no prose. Obs: "no one" instead of "noone" Best wishes, Marius | |
| = Mikki | George Asztalos [18.Nov.08 10:00] |
| I am a newcommer too and thinking that the value of our stuff is more interesting than gramar mistakes...so what I liked about this it's the thing that we have to wake up somtimes when life becomes like nightmare. it's a lovely tirednes the one who brings us to sleepy darknes...:) otherwise you made a lovely childish conversation here about very grave and hatefull things for growned-ups. that's in my opinion the click wich turned poetry on and let the miracols to happend...:) lovely and a bit jalous, george the asztalos | |