= firm | Marius Surleac [10.Dec.08 17:33] |
I like these thoughts of yours - sharp, visual effects, tough, some loss of personality I sense here within the words, strong desire for survival, deep meanings. Per se sawol' pes! Cheers, Marius | |
= I perceive this poem... | John Willy Kopperud [10.Dec.08 21:48] |
...as being dark romantic, despair and pain taken to the limit. Well done! Cheers from Willy | |
= metall-x | dan marius [11.Dec.08 12:52] |
yeap, that's what I say. feed & breed and the rest will follow | |
= . | Laurenţiu Ion [08.Jan.09 12:28] |
images are caught up in large dimensions, a silent intervention of your thoughts. well written! | |
= implacably dual | Veronica Valeanu [21.Feb.09 12:53] |
i liked the voice coming from the mirror or perhaps from the consciousness. raising sympathetic, reproachful, and ending up by begging to be fed by the Other - in exchange promising to offer shelter for the refugee. such a devious voice. power and loss of control at the same time. half-exterior, half-interior. Veronica | |