| = Brilliant apart from two spelling errors. | John Willy Kopperud [17.Jan.09 11:45] |
| A wonderful idea, which I might have rewarded if it wasn't for the fact that you write "once upone" first and lastly "one upones". In each of these cases it must be: "once upon." Please correct these errors! | |
| = good luck in life and love | Pomana Sorin [17.Jan.09 15:36] |
| Ty for that mark... | |
| + There... | John Willy Kopperud [17.Jan.09 15:34] |
| ...you are. Congratulations on a fine poem! Cheers from Willy | |
| = please correct | Diana Todea [18.Jan.09 20:57] |
| please correct: "toghether"-together. I find this poem rather ordinary, but that's my opinion. Cheers, Diana. | |
| = Sorry for missing that h... | John Willy Kopperud [19.Jan.09 00:34] |
| ...it has to go, of course. I still think this little poem is a charmer. Cheers from Willy | |
| = a-ha! | Dora Road [20.Jan.09 11:23] |
| Sorin and his darling sitting in a tree K.I.S.S.I.N.G. I think it's a cute text. | |