| = this poem reminds me of a movie | Laurenţiu Ion [02.Feb.09 22:19] |
| I liked the image of the dark winter, which is very well achieved, starting from the point of contrasts. But I think the end is improper, because the sense rives from the rest. | |
| = to be continued | Diana Todea [05.Feb.09 11:52] |
| Yes, you're right, I think I'll give it a try in a sequel. Cheers, Di. | |