| = grammar... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [27.Feb.09 21:59] |
| as much as my darling/its gone. | |
| = grammar... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [02.Mar.09 10:14] |
| "its" is neutral, cannot substitute a human... if I correctly understand your lines... | |
| = Whatever the poetic intent might be here... | John Willy Kopperud [03.Mar.09 11:09] |
| ...you don't write "make us TO catch cold" in English. Throw the TO out and I'm sure the poem will be approved. (By me at last.) Errors of this sort in otherwise read worthy poems are annoying. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Now that darned error is removed... | John Willy Kopperud [03.Mar.09 20:28] |
| ...and I do enjoy the way emotion comes through in this poem, Gunsel! Cheers from Willy | |
| = Gunsel Djemal | Gunsel DJEMAL [04.Mar.09 01:07] |
| Once again thanks Willy. We are all in a very busy train and it is called LIFE...I type very fast, I make mistakes and errors...I work 8 hours a day. I'm glad to have you all here. Thanks for being there for me and the rest of us. | |