| = really nice | Diana Todea [11.Apr.09 14:11] |
| it's nice to find some good images in your poem. also the flow of the verses is very pleasant. Cheers, Diana. | |
| + unbearable beading of my moan | dan marius [03.Jul.09 09:12] |
| "unbearable beading of my moan". this is brilliant, Sir. I know I'm supposed to justify my star. But this time I choose to remain quiet. You know.. as one should be in an art gallery. | |
| = D.M. | Veronica Valeanu [03.Jul.09 15:00] |
| this poem was written long ago when i indulged in a much too splendiferous way of regarding writing anyway this is the idea - pearls are beautiful only because of our extatic feelings regarding the idea of being hurt but forcing the pearl into being produced is too commercial even for the person i am today... | |
| = ... | Veronica Valeanu [03.Jul.09 15:05] |
| and thank you but you should be less tolerant with a pearl's pride V.V. | |
| = Diana, | Veronica Valeanu [03.Jul.09 15:31] |
| i apologize for not seeing your words earlier. & never trust a pearl that is hushing the oyster | |