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= Why?
Corina Gina Papouis
[29.Apr.09 12:24]
I liked the decadence of this poem and the way it takes you down with it, in a self-destructive rhythm...and yet the question remains: why? Why, oh, why?
‘Is the question that drives us!’ (I think I heard that in the Matrix!:))
i also loved the symmetry of the verse: 'Why did I make you dance that dance'
well, you didn't and you'll never know...:)

I enjoyed it!
Corina

= Again thanks for the feedback!
Negru Iulia Daniela
[12.May.09 20:56]
Thank you Corina! I still have to work on some of the verses... The music is not perfect!

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= Why?	Corina Gina Papouis [29.Apr.09 12:24]
I liked the decadence of this poem and the way it takes you down with it, in a self-destructive rhythm...and yet the question remains: why? Why, oh, why? ‘Is the question that drives us!’ (I think I heard that in the Matrix!:)) i also loved the symmetry of the verse: 'Why did I make you dance that dance' well, you didn't and you'll never know...:) I enjoyed it! Corina

= Again thanks for the feedback!	Negru Iulia Daniela [12.May.09 20:56]
Thank you Corina! I still have to work on some of the verses... The music is not perfect!