= Florin | Corina Gina Papouis [11.May.09 21:08] |
Would you (kindly!) consider replacing 'which' with 'who' - 6th verse? Otherwise a splendid poem that touches the heart in many places at once. Regards, Corina | |
= Corina | florin caragiu [11.May.09 23:11] |
Of course, I have modified, thank you very much, Corina. | |