| = Gunsel! | John Willy Kopperud [25.May.09 21:19] |
| The moon WAS playing hide and seek. It WAS you. Without those two errors this is quite a charming poem. If you revise, I'm sure your text will be approved. Cheers from Willy | |
| = After the necessary revision... | John Willy Kopperud [30.May.09 18:10] |
| ...I find that it's good! Cheers from Willy | |