| = Anguish, longing, uncertainty | Edilberto González Trejos [19.Aug.06 18:56] |
| Anguish and depth, the longing and the uncertainty. All of this I see in this poem, written with some special music from the Soul. Cheers Poetess SONGO | |
| = Senses | John Willy Kopperud [20.Aug.06 09:47] |
| ...I read Songos comment above and I fully agree. Personally I'd like to add an impression of hope and strength within the frame of the words. Excellent work! wipperud | |