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 =  dart
felix nicolau
[15.Sep.06 15:58]
ya, fine model of concision and directness. read it breathless - maybe this is the solution

 =  Well-crafted Willy
Edilberto González Trejos
[04.Oct.06 21:01]
Very well-crafted verses. A fine mini-fiction!
SONGO

 =  Pinnochio
Lorena Biculescu
[02.Nov.06 22:51]
the first thing that comes to my mind when I read this is Pinnochio...i don't know why...i guess it's because of the whale....:D

 =  In the Belly of The Beast
John Willy Kopperud
[05.Nov.06 15:47]

That sequence from Pinocchio is yet one of these sea-monster images that has followed mankind some thousands years through religion, literature and art.
My visualization of the poem is some kind of poster picture from a Hollywood B(C?) movie. The heros appearamce is abundantly (overplayed) masculine. His chin occupies half his face.
Thank you for your contribution to the images, Lorena.

 =  In the Belly of The Beast
John Willy Kopperud
[05.Nov.06 15:47]

That sequence from Pinocchio is yet one of these sea-monster images that has followed mankind some thousands years through religion, literature and art.
My visualization of the poem is some kind of poster picture from a Hollywood B(C?) movie. The heros appearamce is abundantly (overplayed) masculine. His chin occupies half his face.
Thank you for your contribution to the images, Lorena.

 =  In the Belly of The Beast
John Willy Kopperud
[05.Nov.06 15:48]

That sequence from Pinocchio is yet one of these sea-monster images that has followed mankind some thousands years through religion, literature and art.
My visualization of the poem is some kind of poster picture from a Hollywood B(C?) movie. The heros appearamce is abundantly (overplayed) masculine. His chin occupies half his face.
Thank you for your contribution to the images, Lorena.




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