| = a sign of a strong emotion | Heghedus Camelia [08.Nov.06 01:39] |
| This poem has a title that challenge. It is not a shutter, it is a large open window, through which are flowing meanings. Is more than a description of the woman in all her contradiction and complexity. Is more than a disinfection cure (due to woman). This poem is a bunch of symbols, a writing ahead which on feel to bow and stop talking. (Maybe it would be better for me to do like this.) It is about the other side of the coin, about Yin, which cannot be separate from Yang, despite of his wishes for release, despite of “what a chance! there go rumours in the neighbourhood that adam won’t bite eve this year”. Yes, “it’s only a rumour “. The opposite qualities of Yin and Yang are complementary and interdependent, both creating themselves and controlling each other: “a peaceful lust resounds in you”. Green, earth, mew, lust, smile, cellar are symbols of womanhood and ineptness, of the passive principle of nature, express by dark (“cellar”), cold (“price”) and humidity (“wet wick”). The words are chose exceptionally, with double senses. To graze: to feed or to menace Tinder: parasitical fungus or medicine I feel a powerful revolt interlacing with desire. Scared while talking, please take my words just as a sign of a strong emotion. | |
| = camelia | felix nicolau [09.Nov.06 21:09] |
| your very elaborate commentary impressed me. Hopefully my texts won't disappoint you in the future. | |
| = shutter | Heghedus Camelia [10.Nov.06 23:27] |
| Thank you for your answer, surely I won’t be disappointed. | |