| = Clarify | Axel Lenn [10.Nov.03 02:30] |
| "Where are lakes and stars around." - this is an affirmative sentence, the proper order is: subject+predicate. "And the stones above they fall." - double subject you've got there!... Try this: "and the stones above, they fall" or "and the stones above... they fall". | |
| = all done | irina matei [10.Nov.03 14:32] |
| "Above" is used as a preposition, so it is used corectly, but when it comes to "Where are lakes and stars around" thank you for the indication. | |
| = Not quite so | Axel Lenn [11.Nov.03 21:26] |
| Just ask yourself: who falls? THEY do. Who are they? THE STONES ABOVE. I'm afraid your "above" is not a preposition, no. It describes your stones, so it has an adjectival function. Your verse there has 2 subjects: THE STONES that are also THEY. I'd like to translate it into Romanian for you: "Si PIETRELE de deasupra ELE cad". I hope you realize what I'm talking 'bout. If you intended to use "above" as preposition, you shoul have said: "and the stones, above they fall"/"and the stones, they fall above". Use it coRRectly, pls | |