| = changes | Anca Veronica Anghel [13.Nov.03 19:17] |
| "the hugging of the tree and the kiss of the untamed bear" I wonder what kind of kiss is that ? Also I would suggest to change the title. It sounds to me odd. Will you ? | |
| = full moons and half nightmares | enache florin [14.Nov.03 21:03] |
| tis is what this text inspired me(one of the few things that I ever wrote).it's what i was left with...sort of.. I was left to wander beneath the horizon and whisper my knowledge into the waves from the primeval time when I roamed wearing bison menhirs alone are remnants which time saves... | |
| = Aphrodite's arrow | Iuliana Ungureanu [20.Nov.03 00:51] |
| It seems you need an American Native past:) Your hunger for nature, for rich and diverse ancestors is contagious, I dream from time to time of the same things. What did you mean by "believable lies"? I like the reference to Aphrodite, as Homer puts it: "Muse, tell me the deeds of golden Aphrodite the Cyprian, who stirs up the sweet passion in all the gods and subdues the tribes of mortal men and birds that fly in air and all the many creatures that the dry land rears, and all that the sea: all these love the deeds of rich crowned Cytherea" If and when her arrow hits your heart you shall be saved. In the meantime, your title does seem odd but if that's how you wish to keep it it's your choice. "I need flowers, rings..." -have you seen those mood rings that you wear on your fingers and they change color along with your mood? | |
| = love it :) | ioana dintica [27.Dec.08 18:41] |
| I just love it; it reminds me of what I’ve been missing and what I’ll have, what I have forsaken and what I was too scared to admit I do love and yearn for, you’ve set it all very nice in words but I can’t help but wonder if Aphrodite’s sting has put you in the mood to go and “become” yourself or remain near the screen, so close to the dream :) | |