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+ shadow	Anca Veronica Anghel [20.Nov.03 00:06]
I like the shadow of mistery in your short poem Ion. "is that a shadow sniffing at your heels?"
+ In the past...	Iuliana Ungureanu [20.Nov.03 00:37]
In time's spiral, the shadow "sniffing at your heels" is surely one of remembrance and love long gone. As years go by, the spiral tends to shrink on itself until we all become a tiny point or speck of dust.
=  Dominique, Cezara	ion amariutei [20.Nov.03 18:40]
thanks for your visit and kind words. indeed, time is the great projector casting memory like a shadow at your heels, hard to make up your mind: it's there to bite, it's there to blur your feelings?
=  shadow of a spiral	Neisa Conta [23.Nov.03 12:39]
src="http://www.twilightzone.org/images/main/intrface/spiral.jpg"> beautiful indeed... beyond the timeworn tint...
=  Is that a shadow...	Diana Pacuraru [03.Feb.05 23:49]
Good. I like the end, it leaves me (the reader, in this case), with a very eerie and pleasant feeling of being chased.
=  Shadows, light & bodies	Edilberto González Trejos [27.May.05 21:45]
A shadow which, at the end of it all, is nothing but a shadow... A dark projection, resulting from light beating on a body... If we, bodies, crash on light, let us face our shadows... Interesting text, ION, I enjoyed it SONGO
=  brilliant	dan [30.May.05 10:16]
brilliant text. powerful and kind. congratulations
=  Diana, Songo, dan	ion amariutei [11.Jun.05 10:37]
thank you guys and sorry for the delay :)
=  spiral out, keep going	Maria Schuler [01.Sep.05 05:00]
so did you or did you not ascend the spiral? :)) i can't quite get the answear to that from the text ... *wide grin*
=  Maria	ion amariutei [05.Sep.05 08:40]
i'm afraid this spiral has no real direction, just spin :) and the wise man said: for silence is a vice and memory a trap... and the captain said: beam me up Scotty! thanks for the visit, Maria