| = Remember where you come from | Iuliana Ungureanu [19.Nov.03 17:51] |
| We should all remember where we're coming from otherwise we will not know where we're going. | |
| = roots | Anca Veronica Anghel [19.Nov.03 18:14] |
| It is more about understanding our roots, than remembering. I would say it is a kind of intuition from where we come. | |
| = Does anyone really remember? | Bethany Lerie [13.Mar.04 20:33] |
| it is the ultimate yearning for 'Self' which leads to such poinant introspection. I love it! I too have felt the desire for such intuition. . . .maybe someday? | |
| = Primordial scream | Cristina Shtirbu [01.May.04 13:30] |
| The scream theme again. Have you read any Osho? He says that we, as children, don't get to scream enough, our parents don't allow it. And so we grow up in silence, but inside there is great pain we can't express. The thing recommended is something called "the primordial scream" ;) I'd hate to have someone who does that, near me. I think I would do the same. Is poetry YOUR primordial scream? Maybe... "INSTEAD I was one of you" would contrast better with "if" instead of "IN THE MEANTIME" | |
| = in the meantime | Anca Anghel Novac [02.May.04 08:42] |
| This poem is also a translation although there is no link. The word "meantime" it was supposed to mean that I'm living my life as anybody else, in the most ordinary way although I realize that I know few things and that if I would have known more my life would have had a different dimension. Everything about me is happening now. No matter what, time and life are passing "in the meantime" as"I was one of you". Thank you. | |
| = Tracing | Joshua Butawan [25.Dec.04 16:00] |
| your work seems to be looking back from the start, or i should say that tracing our origin. | |
| = thanks to you ma'am | Joshua Butawan [20.Jan.05 02:35] |
| thanks to your poem Ma'am, I realized the somehow I made a wrong things during my past, and because of your poem I realized that i must have guts to face my past, and i also traced it, then analyze oh how did such things happen!!! | |
| = grammar | Veronica Valeanu [04.Mar.09 14:09] |
| a subordinate IF Clause triggers the use of the past perfect (hypothetical wish) - 3rd type. Could you change that, please? neverrtheless, I like the ideas. Veronica | |