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What do you feel for your own text after writing it, as soon as it has cooled off?
   Author: Veronica Văleanu

 Let's talk about it! - the after writing is a fascinating stage of writing. *
 (topic also available on - Agonia International, the Literary Portal on Facebook) *
 Going back to your writing immediately never helps much, except for the form maybe. Go back in a few weeks, or better yet, months, and significant changes may appear *
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It is very brief at this point.  / Edward Wells II
The tone that seems to be developing is intriguing. I hope You will add to this piece. As the charac
on "Insurance for a lifetime", Prose by mia isabela deleanu

Definitely agree with Alina on the "poetry" tag.  / Edward Wells II
And verify your spell check. There are some irregular pluralizations and other possible concerns. (c
on "plastic bottles", Prose by Craig Burke

All the best my thought are just fine / Grebenisan Mihai Marian
Thnx you right...I have many thoughts but I dont write them all:)
on "Mother", Poetry by Grebenisan Mihai Marian

Andrei. / Andrei Rafael
It won't change unless you tell her. HER, not to YOURSELF. So I'd guess...
on "Talking to myself...", Poetry by Ciprian Toader

Andrei. / Andrei Rafael
P.S. I also have the arrow and the bow, but I can't use them, though I wish I could.
on "HATE", Poetry by Andrei Rafael

Thanks. / Andrei Rafael
It is supposed to be simplistic, I was 16 than. Yet, there are many ideas in the poem and developing
on "HATE", Poetry by Andrei Rafael

re: hate / Corina Gina Papouis
It is too simplistic. Try to develop one idea at a time: example: the strength you say is needed
on "HATE", Poetry by Andrei Rafael

Dear Nicolae / Corina Gina Papouis
I would encourage you to explore in more depth the message you are trying to release to the reader.
on "Loving", Poetry by Nicolae VASILE

black is not / El Grande Gringo
darkness does not exist. black is a figment of our limitations.
on "Triangle of life", Poetry by Carmen Codreanu

love sparks / El Grande Gringo
there is no more empathy left. it has all been up for sale and those late shoppers scooped it all. w
on "13 going on 30", Poetry by nica ioana

suggestion / Corina Gina Papouis
Try and reshape some of the verses, maybe get rid of some of the unnecessary words and it will hopef
on "Love", Poetry by Luca Filipescu

< comments >  / Corina Gina Papouis
Please check grammar and spelling! Thanks!
on "Summer, Sunday, sunny day", Poetry by Vasile Mican

< comments >  / Corina Gina Papouis
I understand this is a translation? ok. I guess you need to choose either rhyme or no rhyme at all.
on "The cyclic man", Poetry by Nicolae VASILE

? typo / Corina Gina Papouis
*damaged brains?
on "13 going on 30", Poetry by nica ioana

< comments >  / Corina Gina Papouis
Please see the message I left for you under your previous text. It applies here as well. Regards!
on "A complicated love poem", Poetry by Florentina Anghel

Hi Florentina / Corina Gina Papouis
Welcome to Agonia! :) I believe your text is more of a personal nature, appears more like a blog st
on "An old story", Poetry by Florentina Anghel

< comments >  / Bodea Diana Mihaela
Thank you all very much and please accept my apologies for not following the recomandation. I don't
on "Legend", Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela

< comments >  / Bodea Diana Mihaela
Thank you Cristian. I haven't been so into poetry lately but I decided to visit my "poetic home" and
on "For the sake or argument", Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela

I strongly recommend you to / Veronica Văleanu
Welcome, Carmen! I strongly agree with the idea that a little bit of science makes the perfect in
on "Triangle of life", Poetry by Carmen Codreanu

milk and honey / Dely Cristian Marian
It has that thing that arouses the curiosity. (I've been chasing after your heroes in my mind, as th
on "Legend", Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela

tongue / Dely Cristian Marian
Quite interesting; this poetry is really into arguing... for the sake of a mighty pair perhaps. It
on "For the sake or argument", Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela

< comments >  / Corina Gina Papouis
The rhythm of this poem is broken thus the poem doesn't flow. It could be easily corrected. Rega
on "Legend", Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela

< comments >  / Bodea Diana Mihaela
Ok, thank you. I will try to reshape it.
on "Time and Ego", Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela

< comments >  / Corina Gina Papouis
This poem does not sustain any rhythm, rhyme or white verse. It does not do any favours to the reade
on "Time and Ego", Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela

open your eyes, they are still there / raj thampi
Sounds like there was a serious eye infection. TEodory , don't worry, eye will not fly away. Instea
on "I fly so high ", Poetry by Teodoru Cora-Eliana

grammar... / Romulus Campan
Please reconsider for grammar problems... rc
on "Questions about Life", Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela

grammar... / Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
Please reconsider for grammar and syntax inconsistencies. rcm
on "Legend", Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela

not so simple... / Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
Hi Marilena, I couldn't help noticing the lengthy gap between your last text and this one... You
on "Simply thoughts", Poetry by Niculae Marilena

< comments >  / Veronica Văleanu
I tried myself, and it works. Perhaps you should take more patience with your computer.
on "I call you Hope", Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu

Thank you / Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
so much, but this is exactly the reason I am writting, this option is not working.
on "I call you Hope", Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu

< comments >  / Veronica Văleanu
yes, of course. right below the text there is a case: [this is your text. you can edit this text]
on "I call you Hope", Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu

help / Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
hello:) i have a problem editing this text, may I please get some help?
on "I call you Hope", Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu

< comments >  / Veronica Văleanu
getting the message across
on "It 's still summer 2", Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka

< comments >  / Veronica Văleanu
you aren't disturbing anyone it's not outrageous to be in the situation of having extraordinary t
on "It 's still summer 2", Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka

sorry to disturbe you / Anni- Lorei Mainka
Yes, you decide here, and it is right so. But in more than one way it is still a difficult situatio
on "It 's still summer 2", Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka

look... / Anni- Lorei Mainka
My final verses are for me so short and explain exactly what I want. The change at the beginning -
on "It ' s still summer 1", Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka

thks  / Anni- Lorei Mainka
You're so nice to tell me what you ve seen: I've written "the autumn's doors", because it's a sp
on "It 's still summer 2", Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka

< comments >  / Veronica Văleanu
[when playing, we won't be able to hear the soldiers' steps] instead of [playing, we'll can't hear t
on "It ' s still summer 1", Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka

< comments >  / Veronica Văleanu
[autumn's door] instead of [the autumn's doors] [will be] instead of [we'll be] [mind] [bones]
on "It 's still summer 2", Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka

thank s that there is an sign from an editor / Anni- Lorei Mainka
Would you be so kind and tell me directly : what you mean with "revised"? These poems are a part fr
on "It 's still summer 2", Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka

I like it / Ileana Oana Micu
Indeed it sounds better! I would have never thought to write it in this way...I just wrote what I fe
on "Thoughts", Poetry by Ileana Oana Micu

suggestion / Corina Gina Papouis
Hi there, The way the text appears now is indeed a thought with all the trimmings, but not quite a
on "Thoughts", Poetry by Ileana Oana Micu

Edit Issue / Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
Hei:) with all due respect down this page it clearly says "This is your text: You can edit this text
on "I call you Hope", Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu

Incomplete / James A Williams
This is an incomplete thought. You've thought something but didn't quite write it all down.
on "Mother", Poetry by Grebenisan Mihai Marian

< comments >  / Corina Gina Papouis
Hi Andreea, I found little if any sense in these at all: And get up very hight My heart felt
on "Pieces of a heart", Poetry by Romila Andreea Diana

< comments >  / Veronica Văleanu
if you use capital letters your texts will not be accepted on the main page and there are some typo
on "EVERY ME FROM EVERY BODY ( for tinalouise's-my god is better than your god)", Poetry by Laurentiu Ivanel

welcome / Veronica Văleanu
welcome new member sure, I got the whole picture/ but this literary community's rule require that e
on "One", Poetry by Laurentiu Ivanel

a few ideas / James A Williams
Hi Bianca. I tend to write prose, but as a native English speaker I see why this is in the work
on "Happy for your hell", Poetry by Bianca Dejanu

< comments >  / Veronica Văleanu
I have a strange sensation about this text, I don't know why. In spite of all the things that need i
on "One", Poetry by Laurentiu Ivanel

Hemingway / James A Williams
This is a good start. Please do rid it of your abbreviations, they just don't work, though I'm sure
on "Decision", Personals by Orha Maria Valeria

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